I was finally able to get myself to sit down and proofread another part of Darkest Before Dawn so I could put it on Wattpad. I've now added the first part of chapter two. Yay! I'm really happy about that. I feel like I haven't really introduced my characters well enough, so I plan on adding more to the prologue eventually. I want to add one scene to the prologue that will hopefully be a little longer than the first scene. I know that with some books people don't bother read the prologue and they don't need to, but with mine it would be a good idea if you read it. Right now the prologue doesn't tell you much, but when I add to it then hopefully it will help you get to know the characters a little better. When I go back and do the third draft then I'll try to make the prologue a little less important and I'll probably try not to dive into the adventure right away.
Another thing that's starting to bother me even more now is that the pictures I've found for Dawn, well the girl looks to old to be Dawn. Dawn is supposed to be eighteen, but this girl looks older than that. (pictured above) I may have to make her older in the third draft which means I'll have to change the ages of a few other characters too.
That's all I have for now. Have a blessed day!
Another thing that's starting to bother me even more now is that the pictures I've found for Dawn, well the girl looks to old to be Dawn. Dawn is supposed to be eighteen, but this girl looks older than that. (pictured above) I may have to make her older in the third draft which means I'll have to change the ages of a few other characters too.
That's all I have for now. Have a blessed day!